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Royal_Bitch_Pudding t1_iydp96g wrote
>Now you will be my prison, and I will be your genie
Makes it sound like the guy would be a living vessel for the genie and that he has unlimited wishes.
ParticleDetector OP t1_iycb7pt wrote
Nice!
Mmip t1_iyces5p wrote
Smoke and shadow and fear cloaked the creature. It groaned and creaked like an ancient forest, stretched tall and unshaped before the world. Its dark eyes pulled the gloom from the night sky and peered at me, hungry.
I trembled. The lamp dangled from my arthritic fingertips.
“Wish,” the being whispered.
My lips parted and released the faintest of breaths. “After all this time,” I gasped. “You’re real.”
The shadows twisted and tugged toward an invisible center and formed a figure, an imitation of man. The desert breeze stirred at its edges; the illusion of a cloak billowed in the night. The being’s eyes lingered on me and a mouth cracked open beneath its gaze. “Wish,” it commanded. The cold in its voice stung me. I cleared my throat.
“Genie,” I stated. “I am your master. I will command you.”
The smoke and shadow erupted in front of me. The genie’s eyes vanished, but its voice rang out from the air, clear as birdsong and hard as stone.
“Now that you have freed me, I must grant you three wishes.” I nodded in agreement. “Fable,” it spat. “Assumption.” It commanded again, with more force: “Wish!”
I took a step back. I had searched long for the lamp. Decades spent in obsession, until I was nearly dead in my old age. I scoured and pillaged the remains of the old world to find where it rusted. Dedicated a lifetime to make my desires reality. All the stories, the legends - they all agreed the genie was to be mine to command. A slave, for three wishes.
But now it deigned to command me?
“Wish,” It repeated.
“Why?” I rasped. “Why do you insist? If your servitude is a fable, then what is the truth? Explain it to me.”
“Do you wish it?” The genie asked.
“I do,” I replied. I was tired. Too tired.
A brief glimmer of light flicked across its eyes- surprise, or excitement, I could not tell. But it seemed to take a breath, and said:
“My tale is that of a flower in the sunlight. The plant grows, bound by natural law. The sun nourishes the growing plant, from seed to stem, until it becomes bountiful and mature, and it shares its blossoms with the world. Together, the light and the plant bring forth beauty.”
“The flower is the wish?” I asked.
“Indeed,” replied the genie.
“Is there more to your tale?” I asked. “The stories state you were once a man, enslaved to the lamp.”
The night seemed to sigh around me and the genie continued:
“Nature made me what I am. I have no more beginning than the stars themselves. The lamp is merely an intersection, where I stand to meet you.”
Silence. It contemplated me, waited for me to respond.
“So you are not my servant?”
“No.”
“But you do grant wishes?”
“If they be of sufficient grandeur to bloom,” it said. “Now,” the air pressure dropped. The night convulsed around the genie. “Wish.”
I inhaled deeply. I spent years planning my wishes. Their wording. Three simple wishes, which boiled down to money, life, power. It was always those three and those alone. But now, I might be able to have more wishes. More opportunities. I just had to say the words with sufficient flourish.
“I wish,” I said, “that I be the wealthiest man alive.”
“Ah,” the genie quavered. “Of course. As. you. wish.” It gasped and groaned, the air aroused with magic power.
All the darkness of the night leaked from the world and pooled around the genie’s feet. The sky grew bright and blue. The sand erupted with gold. The new daylight welcomed into the world the change that the genie’s magic weaved.
The genie was no longer cloaked. He was no longer shadow. A naked man stood in the desert sun, his skin the color of roses and his eyes glistening with silver. He shivered in the morning heat. “It is done,” he stated. “You are wealthy beyond measure.”
I grabbed the genie by the shoulders and shook, ecstatic. “For my next wish,” I began. “I wish to be young and in my prime!”
“No,” the genie stated.
“No?” I asked. “But it was only one wish. I thought I would get more.”
“Again,” he said. “You assumed.”
I gestured around me. The golden sand, the crystal clear blue sky. The genie’s own rosey form. “It was beautiful,” I said. “What about the blossoms? We can make another wish blossom just the same.”
The genie reached out and gently took the lamp from my hands. He tucked it away. Where, I could not know.
“You believe you are the plant,” the genie said, his once cold voice laced with pity. “But you are the sunlight.”
“What does that mean?” I asked.
“It means that your wish did not blossom for you,” he said. “It blossomed for me. To keep me alive. I was gasping, moments ago. Hungry. Now, I am satiated, and I will leave you to your wealth.”
“But I am gasping,” I said. “I am hungry, and i am dying too.”
The genie turned away from me and began walking across the sand.
“I am dying!” I repeated, “What good is wealth if I am dead?”
He turned back, and grinned.
And he was gone, in a blink. I fell to my knees, frantic.
“But I won’t live much longer,” I called. “I’ll die like this!” I shouted out for him. “I’ll die too.”
I am dying now. I will expire in mere days. I have spent all my moments wishing. Hoping the genie would hear me and answer.
Have this nourishment of my desires. Please…
I wish I had spent my time on this earth differently. I wish I hadn’t squandered my youth in search of you. I wish I had children. I wish I had friends. I wish I would die surrounded by people I loved. I wish someone loved me. I wish I had asked for life before wealth.
I am alone. And I will die alone.
I wish the genie to rot and decay, that he falls back into shadow and dust. I wish he hides in his lamp and waits forever for a fool who never crosses his path. I wish he dies before he grants another wish. I wish he dies with me. I recently learned that I am petty.
I wish.
Ace_Veloxity t1_iycj1x0 wrote
This is so good!
Mmip t1_iycnw4i wrote
Thank you!
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exponentials t1_iyby7c6 wrote
I had just stumbled across an old, dusty lamp while out exploring, and when I rubbed it, a genie had appeared. He said he would grant me three wishes. For my first wish, I decided to ask the genie to tell me his life story. I figured it would be an interesting tale, and perhaps he could even give me some tips on how to make the most of my wishes.
The genie began to tell me his story. He had been trapped in the lamp for centuries, bound by a powerful magic spell. He had been forced to grant wishes to many people, some of whom had used their wishes selfishly and caused great harm to others.
The genie told me that he had been trying to find a way to break the spell, so that he could finally be free. I was filled with sympathy for him and asked if there was anything I could do to help.
The genie replied that there was one thing I could do: as my third wish, I could wish for the spell to be broken, and the genie to be freed.
I agreed, and made my third wish before my second. As the genie was released from his prison, he thanked me and said he was eternally grateful.
But as he vanished into the night, I noticed something strange. He had left behind a note that read: "Now you will be my prison, and I will be your genie."
The genie had tricked me. By making my third wish, I had unwittingly bound myself to the lamp, and I was now cursed to be the genie, granting wishes to others, just as the genie had been forced to do. And so I remain here to this day, unable to escape my prison, bound to the lamp, my only company the wishes of strangers.