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tilapios t1_iriuy06 wrote

Interesting graphs. I felt I learned a lot more about this pizza place than I was expecting. Some suggestions:

  1. Why the dots at the top? It makes the title really hard to read.
  2. The pizzas in the background at the top are fine. They become distracting when trying to read the graphs below.
  3. All the text is too small, and yet the overall visualization still feels really cramped.
  4. The two figures between the pie charts look really out of place, probably because you've put them on top of a vertical line that separates the orders from the sales. (Yes, I get that those charts have both sales and orders on them.) That vertical line is also not centered, which gives the entire visualization an unbalanced feel.
  5. You don't need five significant figures in the percentages. Two is probably enough. Anything past three is overkill.
  6. In the quarterly profitability graphs, you don't need four significant figures on the tick labels.
  7. The minor ticks on the busiest hour graph are unnecessary.
  8. The text in both the busiest day and time graphs are unnecessary. It's plenty obvious from the graphs which days and times are the most and least busy.
  9. What do you imagine winter pizza to be? What does a brunch recipe at a pizza joint look like?
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pookiedookie232 t1_irlpcej wrote

I'm a bit overwhelmed by the wall-o-fall-colors. White, black, or gray for a background might add some needed contrast.

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mer-reddit t1_irluw5h wrote

Where is the important other data? Like when does the advertising hit? What is the ad and marketing spend? What are they doing to drive sales? What promotions are going on?

This is a start, but the business needs more integrated data, not just raw sales.

Also, why isn’t an NDA in place? Should this data be shared?

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