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CandiBunnii t1_izlvgwc wrote

Gravity, I suppose.

Certainly not magnetism as while you're inexplicably drawn to her, I highly doubt she feels the same.

What are you bringing to the table?

Is there any particular way you expect this "relationship" to be enjoyable for her?

If you think you love her, you need to recognize that she has needs and desires as well.

If those desires are not being held hostage on a boat, you need to be willing to respect that.

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Johnwestrick OP t1_izoh3a9 wrote

I wrote from a predator’s point of view, please don’t think I actually think this way. I definitely don’t condone the man in the stories action. It was more of a writing experiment that was meant to be shocking and get you to think. Thanks for reading and sending a comment!!

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CandiBunnii t1_izohhf3 wrote

(Comments on nosleep act as if everything is 100% real, it's part of the fun!)

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