I understand that a lot of reddit is about being praise worthy. But to learn, you need critique. And as such it is not meant to be an insult. And at the end of the day if you're satisfied with the photography, that's all that matters.

Tones are ok but I think focus needs to be worked on. It feels as though a proper camera/lens was not used. Oddly, it has grain which wouldn't be bad normally. Here instead, it suggests a lighting/exposure problem. But it could also be a lack of proper digital editing.

Something else, at least to myself make this feel lacking. But I'm unable to place what that thing is precisely particularly without taking a second look. I think maybe the focus point is too centered. Much like a bullseye. Perhaps that was what you was going for though.

I believe there may be too much negative space as well, or at least balanced