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GeorgeThe13th t1_jcev657 wrote

Would have been better without the incessant cursing

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Vapsinthe t1_jcf0hhk wrote

Would it? I think you mean bland. The cursing totally changes the intensity of the voice I read the text in and creates an amusing contrast to the gentle imagery.

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Molwar t1_jcfb1g5 wrote

I like it, just pretend it's Samuel L. Jackson's bunny.

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