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GUMinion t1_j63tds8 wrote on January 27, 2023 at 2:54 PM

The vocal production is your low point here. Guitar is groovy

achmedclaus t1_j63vkdh wrote on January 27, 2023 at 3:09 PM

Guitar is pretty good but you're right on the money. Vocals sound like the singer is bored

S0rb0 t1_j644i7g wrote on January 27, 2023 at 4:07 PM

Feel like he's trying to sound a bit like Thom Yorke (radiohead) but it's just not clicking for me. There's potential tho

microice2795 OP t1_j6o94ml wrote on January 31, 2023 at 7:01 PM

An update: https://www.reddit.com/r/Music/comments/10q71ry/last_week_i_posted_here_that_i_would_walk_a/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3

microice2795 OP t1_j6o950k wrote on January 31, 2023 at 7:01 PM

An update: https://www.reddit.com/r/Music/comments/10q71ry/last_week_i_posted_here_that_i_would_walk_a/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3

Cadisis t1_j63wanp wrote on January 27, 2023 at 3:14 PM

I agree, dug the guitar, vocals would work better if modified in some way.

microice2795 OP t1_j6o95jz wrote on January 31, 2023 at 7:01 PM

An update: https://www.reddit.com/r/Music/comments/10q71ry/last_week_i_posted_here_that_i_would_walk_a/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3

microice2795 OP t1_j6o93qg wrote on January 31, 2023 at 7:01 PM

An update: https://www.reddit.com/r/Music/comments/10q71ry/last_week_i_posted_here_that_i_would_walk_a/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3

GUMinion t1_j6oc1gf wrote on January 31, 2023 at 7:19 PM

Did you fix your vocals?