Thank you for putting yourself out there, as someone whose band has cleared rooms it isn’t easy.

It’s a cool riff but it needs to go somewhere beyond 50 bars with some slightly different overdubs to add interest. I get the appeal of a drum machine but it makes it feel robotic/soulless. Perhaps if you got a cheap kit or even a drum emulator on an iPad it could elevate the warmth of the song.

I’ll listen to it again on my walk, but I’ll convert a km into a freedom unit.