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chilanvilla t1_j6xfh6x wrote

Sorry, but I don't know what your primary point is.

State it in your first line, then ramble. Restate it in the last line.

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dbznzzzz t1_j6zwkqu wrote

1: tell them what you want to tell them. 2: tell them. 3: tell them what you just told them.

Include the who, where, why, when, and how as best you can.

Good starting point. A lot of people giving this kid a hard time but this is constructive feedback for life in general.

Honestly if OP has a passion for participating in local politics more power to him. 24 years old is plenty early to start studying the craft. But yeah part of communicating is knowing your audience and being savvy in the words you use.

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