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IMLRG t1_j8o1msv wrote

Reply to comment by ReddyBeeBop in [WP] You are kidnapped by the villain regularly, but you’re starting to look forward to it. You know they won’t hurt you, and are simply being dramatic. It also doesn’t help that you are the only person they ever kidnap. This time, the hero doesn’t bother trying to save you. by SkyGriff10

Constructive criticism here. The formatting of this story ruins it for me. The font is weird, and the huge blocks of text make it very cumbersome to read. If this story was formatted well, I'm sure it would be a good read. But, for now, I couldn't get past the first paragraph.

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ReddyBeeBop t1_j8oz25k wrote

I wrote it in google docs while I was at work, copy and paste put it in formatted like this.

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