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t1_jdwm4am wrote

Reply to comment by in [WP] You are a horrible villain. It isn't that you're especially dangerous or cunning--you're just really bad at it. by

“Holding a pack of his favorite bears” I know what it’s meant to be but imagining the hero to just walk in with a bunch of bears

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t1_jdwmmpp wrote

God what a cluster fuck. There were at least 10 errors. This is what happens when you write and don't bother to proofread. Sorry to you and anybody else who invested time reading it.

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