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NextEstablishment856 OP t1_je9ysgu wrote

Reply to comment by HunterWindmill in [WP] The spy has been in with the rebels for years, but never felt a need to change sides before. Now, as the spies organization is actively raiding the main rebel base and plans to extract them, something convinces them to turn. by NextEstablishment856

I was so rapt, I didn't notice any mistakes. Not saying there are none there. In fact, just glance and caught a "forced" where you meant "forces," but nothing shook me out of enjoying the story and atmosphere as I read.

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