jpb103 OP t1_je0c8ei wrote on March 28, 2023 at 2:35 PM

Reply to comment by PracticingPrompts in [WP] The church says that all people are born with 'Original Sin'. What they don't know is that this sin was actually something you did 10,000 years ago to become immortal. by jpb103

Chilling. Well done!

PracticingPrompts t1_je0d9ur wrote on March 28, 2023 at 2:42 PM

Thanks for a good first prompt for me!

EasilyDelighted t1_je45e68 wrote on March 29, 2023 at 7:59 AM

So I'm trying to understand. Is Cannibalism the original sin?

I'm a little confused about the shrine cave. Is this lucifer? So many questions~~~

r3dm0nk t1_je48ql3 wrote on March 29, 2023 at 8:49 AM

Sounds to me like a vampire of sort

PracticingPrompts t1_je4xc7q wrote on March 29, 2023 at 1:19 PM

Personally, I just wrote this story as fast as I could, so I just went with the idea that Original Sin was that he wielded the first act of violence against someone in like, ancient times. The shrine is super vague because I wanted it to be as cryptic as the Gods before the commonly known Abrahamic one.

Jacob eating the rest was just a haunting line I came up with lol