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NikiTheBlob t1_jd2k8wa wrote

Reply to comment by 12pcMcNugget in [WP] Everyone loves the brooding Adventurer who took a liking to your village. For weeks, they have been quietly enjoying your peaceful ways and helping around. The Hero's secret is that this is only delaying the inevitable. Once they go back to advancing the Main Quest, the village will be doomed. by Daedal75

Thank you! You're very kind. I'll definitely keep practicing! :)

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12pcMcNugget t1_jd2pckt wrote

Gotta say though, you absolutely nailed it. I've never seen the quote-en-quote game part of the prompt/story be integrated so seamlessly, or at least in such a satisfying way.

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NikiTheBlob t1_jd30c42 wrote

Ahh, thank you! I'm very grateful for your kind words. I still do know there's still a lot of work ahead of me - especially with the narration vs dialog. I know my characters "feel" younger than I'd like them to be while narrating, but I'll keep practicing and hopefully get the effect I am looking for. :) I hope to read some of your works in the future, as well! I'm sure your work is wonderful, and I wish you the best with getting better too!

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