Seb_Romu t1_jecb7yb wrote
Contrast a sunrise with a sunset, through metaphor, and without using the words "sun", "set", or "rise".
so_unstable11 OP t1_jechn03 wrote
Small children enter a classroom for the first time
Their eyes lighting up like the world at daybreak.
A year beginning.
Little stars ready to shine.
A universe of learning waiting for them
A room revolving around them
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Young adults leave a classroom for the last time
Their eyes watering
A era ending
Stars in there own right
A new side of the world to light up
Seb_Romu t1_jechwow wrote
I like it!
so_unstable11 OP t1_jecndq2 wrote
Thanks I know I could do better
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