WhiteKnigth t1_je13i9r wrote on March 28, 2023 at 5:29 PM

Reply to comment by GrunkleStanwhich in [WP] In hell, people can choose what happens to them. They can choose literally ANYTHING. Naturally, many people try to exploit this by going for luxuries and pampering, but the devil ALWAYS has ways to torture those fools... by Crystal1501

Damm, but should her not have her a say on the matter I doubt the heavens would allow it, easiest option would be for her to not be the "real" one but they won't tell him that. Anyway great one.

Crystal1501 OP t1_je13zjf wrote on March 28, 2023 at 5:32 PM

Someone said something similar in response to another story with a husband. Seems like people don't take kindly to leaving behind eternal happiness for some reason...

WhiteKnigth t1_je14rk6 wrote on March 28, 2023 at 5:37 PM

Now that you mention it, maybe shen belonged there and she wished to be in heaven and his wish retuned her there Wich would be even more brutal,.

But at least on my case, heaven is the perfect place to not have anything done to you without consent.

The more I think about the more scenarios popup, you did a truly awesome work.

Crystal1501 OP t1_je14ynw wrote on March 28, 2023 at 5:38 PM

Lol all I did was write the prompt! But thanks!

GrunkleStanwhich t1_je182tz wrote on March 28, 2023 at 5:58 PM

Thanks! I think I had a few ideas in mind, one just being that demons could be cunning enough to snatch or borrow a person from heaven. The other being that she's not the real her and more of a representation to punish him. Up to interpretation.