designbat t1_jdqtjs9 wrote
Reply to comment by NextEstablishment856 in [WP]As the overnight caretaker at the cemetery, you'd befriended the ghost of a young girl staying there. Tonight she seems distraught. Her killer visited her grave today. by sticky-pete
Great story. I appreciate your characterization of the ghost with not one unneeded detail. Your writing is both suspenseful and succinct.
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