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headoftheasylum t1_iu7fosk wrote

I'm surprised by all the criticism! This is a short story prompt, people aren't expected to write novels explaining the plot line and history of the magic realm the characters live in.

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Mooses_little_sister t1_iu8pmb8 wrote

Thank you for reading! I was a bit surprised too, but they do have some interesting points, which I'll store away in my brain for future stories that might be longer.

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