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HelloWorld1352 t1_iu4lyqw wrote

Shard ran into the bank, eager to join the fight. The amateur superhero was new to crimefighting but was excited to take part in her first fight.

The robbers looked at the newcomer, then shared a confused look. The heroine was dressed in a shimmering costume decorated with gaudy jewelry. It was something people expected to see at fashion shows, not in combat.

“Hey, princess, get your sparkly ass out of here or we’ll put a bullet in your skull!” shouted one of the robbers.

Shard took a deep breath, remembering the speech she had practiced hundreds of times in private.

“Halt, criminals, let the civilians go or prepare to receive a deadly beatdown!”

They burst into laughter and aimed their guns at her. Too bad. Now she would have to get serious.

She used her power on the reflective floor. Black tendrils emerged from it and grabbed one of the robbers before any of them could react.

“Jesus Christ, help me!”

Then it pulled him straight into the earth, the ground parting like water in the face of a falling stone. Shard knew he would never be seen again.

“Garry!”

“What have you done with him, you monster?”

“Open fire!”

Shard raised her arms up, summoning a wall of tentacles to shield her, simultaneously creating more tendrils from every reflective surface in the area. There were a few terrified screams, and in a few seconds, the gunmen were gone. The girl had no idea if they were dead or alive, but, honestly, it was probably better she didn’t.

Shard turned to the horrified citizens with an innocent smile.

“You’re safe now.”

Then, with her work complete, she walked out of the bank.


Over the next few days, Shard received phone calls and emails from villainous organizations, asking her to join them. Meanwhile, the incident at the bank was all over the news, and superhero teams all over the city were making it their new mission taking her down.

She sighed.

“Being a superhero is a lot harder than I thought.”

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Crystal1501 t1_iu4r7uc wrote

If I were her, I'd just surrender myself to the heroes. Show I'm not a threat, explain myself. Even beg them to keep me away from villains. I was actually thinking of making a story like that myself, but I've done plenty of surrender stories before lol. Still, an idea for a part 2?

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HelloWorld1352 t1_iu4rbf9 wrote

Maybe I’ll write one later.

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Deaf_Bard t1_iu8njif wrote

A part two would be great !

And happy cake day

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AdventureCoArt t1_iu6i4t1 wrote

I don't think that would work, but it IS an interesting plot device. Heroes and villains tend to be pretty closed minded in a lot of universes, they might just think she got scared of them and surrendered. The best thing would be to start talking to media outlets, sitting down. Villains hardly ever do this. Or do campaigns in orphanages, hospitals, ect.

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Lux_Incola t1_iu6kwmt wrote

Yeah, they do, Lex luthor.

The beauty of that though, is that it's a successful strategy.

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HaikuBotStalksMe t1_iu5jjm3 wrote

And then when the heroes come to arrest you, you send them to the shadow realm.

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kiwidude4 t1_iu82axb wrote

Congratulations you’ve been sent to forever jail!

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Putigordies t1_iu7e32d wrote

Happy cake day op also sweet story

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HelloWorld1352 t1_iu7ebx7 wrote

I somehow didn’t even notice today was my cake day. Thanks for the compliment!

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KittensMeow666 t1_iu613i7 wrote

Would this be bad if I bent over and wanted these "tentacles " to touch my naughty bits? I don't think so.

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