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SirPiecemaker t1_ixy09c3 wrote

"Hold your fire, I repeat, hold your fire!!" the soldier at the front of the strike team yelled out, his gun still trained at the blood-soaked man standing in front of him, handgun in hand. When they breached the compound door, they expected many things - a lone researcher was not one of them.

"Oh," the man said with a tired voice, "Mr Harding, is that you under there?"

"Doctor Marchetti?!" the soldier yelled out with audible shock.

"Yes, yes, I- I apologize for my manners, it's just-" Marchetti said and turned around, yet his demeanour was off, slowly, sluggish, like he was in a daze.

"Get me a medic! Doctor, is anyone with you?"

"It's... not my blood," he chuckled slowly. "No, I... don't think, I- I was alone in my office, the gloomhags overrun the facility- there was a breach you see- I-" he said but stumbled forward, unable to stand properly.

"Doc, come on, sit," Harding said and helped the man. "Let me take the gun."

"The... gun? Oh, yes, yes, the... you know, I'm a better shot... than I thought. Maybe I missed... my calling," Marchetti said and slowly handed the soldier his firearm. It was splattered with blood and stank of gunpowder. It seemed that it was not only fired numerous times but used as a blunt weapon as well.

"Alright Doc," Harding continued, "let's get you looked at." He looked the man over and noticed his other hand was clenched tight to the point where the doctor's knuckles turned white. "What's in your other-"

"NO!" Marchetti yelled suddenly with far more vigour than expected, "no no you- you mustn't touch it! It's..." he slowly opened his hand and showed Harding the thus far tightly held brass pocket watch.

"A watch?" Harding said incredulously.

"7663-B," Marchetti said with a slight smile as he slumped back down, his outburst of energy taking its toll.

"Wait, that's-" Harding's face turned pale and he shifted slightly away from the doctor.

"I know... I know, Martin," Marchetti said quietly. "I just- I thought that I could help some of the survivors but there... were none."

Another soldier approached the duo.

"Sir, I need you to step back, I need to take a look at him," he said. Harding turned and saw the red cross on the soldier's uniform.

"I'm- uh, Jenkins, I-" Harding stuttered.

"What he means to say is that you can't help me, sir," Marchetti said. "Used the watch, you see?" he said and weakly lifted his hand. The medic looked at the two men confused.

"It's..." Harding croaked, "it's one of the unique items we store. Compresses the rest of your life into one hour. Gives you..."

"Speed and vigour of many years in one hour to fight off a tide of ugly critters," Marchetti chuckled. He looked at the watch. It was one minute 'till twelve.

"Is there anyone you want us to contact?" Harding solemnly asked.

"Everyone I knew here is dead," Marchetti said. "Just... Miss Laurits in HR, she recruited me."

"I know her, yes."

"Tell her not to blame herself," Marchetti continued. "I may have died here, but... because of the things I have seen here... I've lived as well."

Harding nodded and put his hand on Marchetti's shoulder.

"It's been a pleasure, Doc," Harding said.

"Don't let anyone touch... the watch..." Marchetti said and went limp. The brass timepiece slid out of his hand and hit the concrete floor with a metallic clang.

And the minute hand ticked to midnight.

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Godarn t1_ixy4b3f wrote

I very much like the addition of the watch, very cool

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WTFwhatthehell t1_ixybofc wrote

It feels like an SCP entry but the number is too high.

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Falkerz t1_ixyd404 wrote

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CletusCanuck t1_ixz307d wrote

SCP-7663 slot is open, OP. Go for it!

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SirPiecemaker t1_ixz9hl0 wrote

I tried putting together an SCP some time ago. It's a REAL bother to even get admins to look at your draft so they approve it.

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nightblade2007 t1_ixzcim3 wrote

That's where the forum comes into play. Decently sure you can just get it greenlit there

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Winjin t1_iy0bh6y wrote

Yeah, I believe they're just wary of newcomers trying to insert straight into the Wiki. It's forums first, then sandbox, then it gets into the Wiki.

I'm still scared how many new articles are there now. When I learned of the Wiki, there were just a bit over a thousand I think.

Then there was also a big purge, where a lot of popular articles were thoroughly cleaned up, and most mentions of godlike doctors were removed, because they seemed to start taking over everything with their self-inserts. Plus some of them were "handed over" to other Organizations. And still... Thousands.

Impressive.

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SureWhyNot5182 t1_iy4cs5y wrote

Now there are... a little over 7000? And some of them are just plain crappy or so bad they should be a -J.

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SirPiecemaker t1_iy2pd92 wrote

I did go there first and just couldn't get anyone to look at my draft.

The one guy I did get to look at it kept asking me what the 'resolution' of the article would be which frankly confused me, considering it's a preset article.

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TDGJ2 t1_iy0e4dt wrote

I agree with your statement

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Ironfiend81 t1_iy03vzt wrote

Got a very Warehouse 13 vibe to it. Perhaps this is how one of the other Warehouses fell.

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Lionessia76 t1_iy1wj9i wrote

Oh awesome- I am not the only one who had this thought!!

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ItsTheCoffeeKnight t1_ixzwg40 wrote

Could I do a voice over of this?

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CaptainNemo42 t1_iy12ulc wrote

Spectactular entry, OP!! Vivid, lean, and original. Made the hair on my neck stand up

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