Submitted by Epictauk t3_z5pq4s in WritingPrompts
SirPiecemaker t1_ixy09c3 wrote
"Hold your fire, I repeat, hold your fire!!" the soldier at the front of the strike team yelled out, his gun still trained at the blood-soaked man standing in front of him, handgun in hand. When they breached the compound door, they expected many things - a lone researcher was not one of them.
"Oh," the man said with a tired voice, "Mr Harding, is that you under there?"
"Doctor Marchetti?!" the soldier yelled out with audible shock.
"Yes, yes, I- I apologize for my manners, it's just-" Marchetti said and turned around, yet his demeanour was off, slowly, sluggish, like he was in a daze.
"Get me a medic! Doctor, is anyone with you?"
"It's... not my blood," he chuckled slowly. "No, I... don't think, I- I was alone in my office, the gloomhags overrun the facility- there was a breach you see- I-" he said but stumbled forward, unable to stand properly.
"Doc, come on, sit," Harding said and helped the man. "Let me take the gun."
"The... gun? Oh, yes, yes, the... you know, I'm a better shot... than I thought. Maybe I missed... my calling," Marchetti said and slowly handed the soldier his firearm. It was splattered with blood and stank of gunpowder. It seemed that it was not only fired numerous times but used as a blunt weapon as well.
"Alright Doc," Harding continued, "let's get you looked at." He looked the man over and noticed his other hand was clenched tight to the point where the doctor's knuckles turned white. "What's in your other-"
"NO!" Marchetti yelled suddenly with far more vigour than expected, "no no you- you mustn't touch it! It's..." he slowly opened his hand and showed Harding the thus far tightly held brass pocket watch.
"A watch?" Harding said incredulously.
"7663-B," Marchetti said with a slight smile as he slumped back down, his outburst of energy taking its toll.
"Wait, that's-" Harding's face turned pale and he shifted slightly away from the doctor.
"I know... I know, Martin," Marchetti said quietly. "I just- I thought that I could help some of the survivors but there... were none."
Another soldier approached the duo.
"Sir, I need you to step back, I need to take a look at him," he said. Harding turned and saw the red cross on the soldier's uniform.
"I'm- uh, Jenkins, I-" Harding stuttered.
"What he means to say is that you can't help me, sir," Marchetti said. "Used the watch, you see?" he said and weakly lifted his hand. The medic looked at the two men confused.
"It's..." Harding croaked, "it's one of the unique items we store. Compresses the rest of your life into one hour. Gives you..."
"Speed and vigour of many years in one hour to fight off a tide of ugly critters," Marchetti chuckled. He looked at the watch. It was one minute 'till twelve.
"Is there anyone you want us to contact?" Harding solemnly asked.
"Everyone I knew here is dead," Marchetti said. "Just... Miss Laurits in HR, she recruited me."
"I know her, yes."
"Tell her not to blame herself," Marchetti continued. "I may have died here, but... because of the things I have seen here... I've lived as well."
Harding nodded and put his hand on Marchetti's shoulder.
"It's been a pleasure, Doc," Harding said.
"Don't let anyone touch... the watch..." Marchetti said and went limp. The brass timepiece slid out of his hand and hit the concrete floor with a metallic clang.
And the minute hand ticked to midnight.
Godarn t1_ixy4b3f wrote
I very much like the addition of the watch, very cool
WTFwhatthehell t1_ixybofc wrote
It feels like an SCP entry but the number is too high.
CletusCanuck t1_ixz307d wrote
SCP-7663 slot is open, OP. Go for it!
SirPiecemaker t1_ixz9hl0 wrote
I tried putting together an SCP some time ago. It's a REAL bother to even get admins to look at your draft so they approve it.
nightblade2007 t1_ixzcim3 wrote
That's where the forum comes into play. Decently sure you can just get it greenlit there
Winjin t1_iy0bh6y wrote
Yeah, I believe they're just wary of newcomers trying to insert straight into the Wiki. It's forums first, then sandbox, then it gets into the Wiki.
I'm still scared how many new articles are there now. When I learned of the Wiki, there were just a bit over a thousand I think.
Then there was also a big purge, where a lot of popular articles were thoroughly cleaned up, and most mentions of godlike doctors were removed, because they seemed to start taking over everything with their self-inserts. Plus some of them were "handed over" to other Organizations. And still... Thousands.
Impressive.
SureWhyNot5182 t1_iy4cs5y wrote
Now there are... a little over 7000? And some of them are just plain crappy or so bad they should be a -J.
nightblade2007 t1_iy2fu5l wrote
Yeah. Hey do you remember the department of decomissions?
SirPiecemaker t1_iy2pd92 wrote
I did go there first and just couldn't get anyone to look at my draft.
The one guy I did get to look at it kept asking me what the 'resolution' of the article would be which frankly confused me, considering it's a preset article.
JaggedTheDark t1_iy1oaqz wrote
Call it "The Temporal Timepiece"
Supersim54 t1_iy243jm wrote
I like this
GoatTheMinge t1_iy0s6p0 wrote
GOC base I'd guess
JustTiredAllTheTime t1_iyc6lhx wrote
The archives currently go up to 7999.
Have you taken your mnestics today?
TDGJ2 t1_iy0e4dt wrote
I agree with your statement
Crimzon_Avenger t1_ixy78mt wrote
Damn really cool with the addition of the watch
Ironfiend81 t1_iy03vzt wrote
Got a very Warehouse 13 vibe to it. Perhaps this is how one of the other Warehouses fell.
Lionessia76 t1_iy1wj9i wrote
Oh awesome- I am not the only one who had this thought!!
ItsTheCoffeeKnight t1_ixzwg40 wrote
Could I do a voice over of this?
Yarhim t1_iy0n19l wrote
You got my up vote
SirPiecemaker t1_iy2phnf wrote
I'd be honoured! Please let me know when it's done, I'd love to listen to it!
ItsTheCoffeeKnight t1_iy84n1v wrote
Will do! I'll reply here when I'm done :)
gibgerbabymummy t1_ixzxrv6 wrote
Phenomenal.
CaptainNemo42 t1_iy12ulc wrote
Spectactular entry, OP!! Vivid, lean, and original. Made the hair on my neck stand up
SirPiecemaker t1_iy2plt9 wrote
Thank you for the kind words!
DangerMacAwesome t1_iy0673f wrote
That was awesome
Lionessia76 t1_iy1wgvb wrote
All I can say, is WOW!!
MrRedoot55 t1_iy23x9i wrote
Good job.
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