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The_Vain_Gentleman t1_izpv5ut wrote

Reply to comment by GForceHangover in [WP] You finally did it, you built a time machine! You head back 2000 years to Jerusalem, thinking you'd finally end the debate and see Jesus for yourself... but, when you finally find him and look at him, he suddenly turns towards you as if struck by an invisible force, rage visible in his eyes. by NewRomanian

This is so exceptionally well written, kudos

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GForceHangover t1_izq1f7i wrote

Well, thank you. Hadn’t written a short story in a bit. I kinda like the idea of Lovecraftian Jesus meets A Wrinkle In Time.

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