Submitted by Kitty_Fuchs t3_zvvclr in WritingPrompts
Fedorable_557 t1_j1s7bnj wrote
Reply to comment by Parictis in [WP] You died and awoke in the afterlife. It's quite nice actually. The people and atmosphere are a lot nicer than you are used to and there is no stress or pressure. When you ask what good deed got you into heaven you are informed that this is hell, followed by a visit from a very concerned demon. by Kitty_Fuchs
Holy shit dude, that was very well written and eloquent. Very well done
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Imaginary-Carrot-424 t1_j1spd8g wrote
Really good. First ever time I bothered to comment.
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