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MyLifeisTangled t1_j1slmfm wrote

Reply to comment by Parictis in [WP] You died and awoke in the afterlife. It's quite nice actually. The people and atmosphere are a lot nicer than you are used to and there is no stress or pressure. When you ask what good deed got you into heaven you are informed that this is hell, followed by a visit from a very concerned demon. by Kitty_Fuchs

This was amazing! I love where you went with it. It could really use some proofreading, but well done!

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[deleted] t1_j1stoil wrote

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MyLifeisTangled t1_j1swvw5 wrote

I get that. Sometimes I just really like the idea I have and I’m in such a rush to get it all written out that I make mistakes along the way like that. Happens to everyone!

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PM451 t1_j21pett wrote

> iPhone auto-correct

proves the absence of god. It exists to remind us we're in hell.

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