Submitted by Kitty_Fuchs t3_zvvclr in WritingPrompts
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Reply to comment by Sillygirl292 in [WP] You died and awoke in the afterlife. It's quite nice actually. The people and atmosphere are a lot nicer than you are used to and there is no stress or pressure. When you ask what good deed got you into heaven you are informed that this is hell, followed by a visit from a very concerned demon. by Kitty_Fuchs
I follow Toby until we get to a black taxi cab. A faceless man is driving the cab.. I get scared and step back, Toby just rolls his eyes. " he won't hurt you his face is that way as it's his punishment." I climb into the cab and can not take my eyes off the man.." What did he do to get that kind of punishment?" I Whisper ask Toby.
The man replies in a kind but tired voice." I was vain in life so vain I ended up bullying people and calling them ugly and thinking myself better than everyone else because of how I looked, I died on the operating table getting another unnecessary surgery...as my punishment no one but me can see my face, to others I'm faceless" Toby smiles at the man " that's right but being vain is not a unforgivable sin...for this sin the person will work off their sin for a set amount of time..how long do you have left Frank...1000 years ? " 957 years left to go," says the taxi driver. I look at them, both confused. " But why a taxi driver? " I ask. Toby gets an annoyed look on his face. " The l sinner does not choose the kind of job he must do to work off their sins, but most of the time, the sinner is assigned to help a Demon..in this case Frank is my driver"
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