Enigma1984 t1_j1vh8ht wrote on December 27, 2022 at 6:31 PM

Reply to comment by xHexical in [WP] You died and awoke in the afterlife. It's quite nice actually. The people and atmosphere are a lot nicer than you are used to and there is no stress or pressure. When you ask what good deed got you into heaven you are informed that this is hell, followed by a visit from a very concerned demon. by Kitty_Fuchs

Yeh I wrote it quite late at night. It could do with an edit if I'm honest, a few little bits of clunky language like that and some repetition. I'm happy with the ideas behind it though.