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AstroRide t1_j0m18ph wrote on December 17, 2022 at 6:12 PM

Reply to comment by DmonRth in [CW] Smash 'Em Up Sunday: Disco by Cody_Fox23

This is an interesting story, but I'm a little confused. I thought Blue and Laurel were the same person, but I was confused as they went back and forth in perspective. Maybe rework for clarity.