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Smart-A22 OP t1_j2deirn wrote

Reply to comment by NotMuchChop in [WP] A young and talented wizard has suddenly lost his ability to use magic. While he panics his master just tells him to calm down and think about this question for a while: "What is magic?" As the young man ponders this question his eyes widen as a sudden realization comes to him. by Smart-A22

This is a really good story.

The young boy going through his struggle of losing his power is interesting and sympathetic, but the real star of this show is the old mentor.

His personality and dialogue are what really makes this story so good, and that is a testament to your talent for characterization.

Great Job!

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