Fontaigne t1_j26anih wrote
Reply to comment by Surinical in [WP] Quantum Physics responds when things are being observed. For some reason, the universe doesn't consider you to be an observer, and daily life can get pretty weird when no one is watching. by akschurman
>Dale looked at me[, ] baffled[, ] then all around.
>Dale stuck a hand through its face as it sniffed him to scratch his beard.
Looks like it's sniffing him to scratch his beard. Perhaps move the reason earlier?
>Dale moved to scratch his beard, and stuck a hand through its face where it was sniffing him.
>Don't show it [that] you can see it.
HardcoreMandolinist t1_j26x4e3 wrote
>Dale scratched his beard, his hand moving through its face as it sniffed him.
Fontaigne t1_j2di1h9 wrote
That's better, yes.
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