Submitted by MidgardWyrm t3_zyavne in WritingPrompts
GrumpusBear t1_j283071 wrote
Reply to comment by A_Very_StrangeQuark in [EU] You, an ordinary person with a boring job, marry the love of your life... and unknowingly into a big crime family. You don't notice because you've always been socially awkward. Because of your apparently blasé attitude to tense situations, you've developed a reputation in the Underworld by MidgardWyrm
This is great! You captured the emotions on Meiling perfectly. I've met people just like her and I read it in their voice.
A_Very_StrangeQuark t1_j2bat4f wrote
Thanks! I'm glad you thought the emotions came through well, I was worried that I was pushing it a bit much at points.
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