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AShellfishLover t1_j6eabh2 wrote

Reply to comment by [deleted] in [WP] The person you're dating comes to dinner to meet your family. But the instant you step in the door, your grandmother goes deathly pale, and shouts the name of a creature from her country's folklore. by Affectionate_Bit_722

I finished it today, so I think you're swell.

Happy cake day!

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Goblue5891x2 t1_j6eefkh wrote

Thank you. I was very impressed with this. The addition of Swedish into the text added to the story, not detracted. It was well done. I'm a pretty harsh critic of writing, but this has been the best writing prompt response I've read so far this year. Kudos.

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