AShellfishLover t1_j6izp64 wrote on January 30, 2023 at 5:55 PM

Reply to comment by Slammogram in [WP] The person you're dating comes to dinner to meet your family. But the instant you step in the door, your grandmother goes deathly pale, and shouts the name of a creature from her country's folklore. by Affectionate_Bit_722

I mean I could have, but you also have the option to explore. Or not.

Slammogram t1_j6j2n1f wrote on January 30, 2023 at 6:13 PM

I’m also not the only person who commented this. It’s a fair critique. No one is tearing you up. Everyone here is saying it’s well written. But there is important dialogue between the grandmother and Anders and it would be helpful, especially for a mobile user like me, to have seen that in your afternote, and would have been less inconvenient for you, than the reader.