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wandering_cirrus t1_j6ljfxj wrote

The relationship between the hero and the demon(?) is quite interesting! One small thing to note is that I think this would probably be easier to read if you broke it up into paragraphs?

Also the idea of a hero sending a demon books quite amuses me.

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Aquariousity01 t1_j6ljodt wrote

I did lol. Just forgot to double hit the enter button to make more space. But thanks for the feedback 😄

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