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Lastboss42 t1_j5x1bg5 wrote

Reply to comment by SmittyThee1 in [WP] Your superpower isn’t anything special. You can make stuff disappear behind your back then pull it back out again. When a friend at a party asks you to do it to them it sounds like a great laugh. But when you pull them back out they look older, disheveled, and are frantic to be sent back. by A_GOOD_NINJA

every new line of dialogue from a different speaker should start new paragraph. this is very hard to follow.

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SmittyThee1 t1_j5x5wyo wrote

I appreciate the constructive comment. This is my first one of these and I'll definitely keep that in mind next time.

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