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Icy-Cartographer-409 t1_jeeif8z wrote

I love it in the Anne of Green Gables series, because it helps accentuate the way that Anne sees the world.

It vividly paints a clear image of what is there for the reader. What I find is ironic is that your sentence feels very difficult to read, and needed multiple full stops. I'd rather read a book with decided "purple prose" than writing of the level you just made me read.

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