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kit_leggings t1_jdvb55e wrote

There's a really good 400 page novel buried in there somewhere, but I'm not exactly sure which parts comprise it.

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shnoogle111 OP t1_jdvbgfd wrote

Agreed. I found certain passages enthralling and others meandering, but it was maybe a 50/50 split. I think in writing there is sometimes a hesitancy for editors to edit too much on an author that has displayed some level of critical merit or general popularity.

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