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StarcraftMan222 t1_j1wp6kj wrote

I did not like it and did not finish it. Page after page of lusting over a man's does not make a good book to me.

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brunettedude t1_j1y0nxs wrote

As a gay man, it 1000% read as a woman trying to write a fan fiction over a gay couple. Yeah, she tried to make it sound lustful, but couldn't even go all the way with that either. What, no mention of olive oil? How are they going to have sex then? Spit?

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melkaba9 t1_j1x012s wrote

Yeah! They didnt love each other. It was just lust. Patroclus was the least interesting part imo

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