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Lexvian t1_istrzgo wrote

I wonder how long it took them to put the pieces together and realize its only people with long hair that went missing. Amazing comic btw!

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GenericOnlineName OP t1_istwxjs wrote

Thank you so much! :)

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Nixplosion t1_isu60ee wrote

If I were you I'd expand on this idea into a short horror story or something!

Better yet!

A webcomic series or a book! You really have something here. You should consider expanding this idea beyond four panels!

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GenericOnlineName OP t1_isu6mvo wrote

I have a handful of stories that I could make into longer narratives. I like to sample bits of them for these inktober comics. Usually I dip into my inspiration and take a segment for a smaller story.

But eventually I'll expand these into longer narratives. :)

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Nixplosion t1_isu6z0n wrote

Please do! I'd be excited to read more of it!

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troistigrestristes t1_isv4g8l wrote

I do like the idea of this being part of a mystery story, and the fact that the girls have long hair being a common point that the reader may not realise before it is revealed in the middle of the story!

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Alarid t1_iswfc1b wrote

And then it is all just a misunderstanding and all those girls just keep getting their hair caught in the trees and accidentally tearing their entire head off.

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