The only, and I mean ONLY thing I'd change here is to put a reflective edge around the obelisk, one that moves as the blue light from the rift edge and the pink light from the clouds overpower each other. I like the obelisk being vantablack™ but it was hard for my eyes to focus on it. Other than that, fucking incredible work. I love the perspective, it feels like all the air around me would be getting sucked past and into the rift. The atmosphere you've created is incredible!