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throwawayhyperbeam t1_j852y0a wrote

> "She has this lemon cake that has this lemon curd in it, with a raspberry on top. It is by far my favorite," Emily Harris said.

Article starting with the important stuff first

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AwesomeBrainPowers t1_j85auv2 wrote

Specific, happy details of a victim's life are a quick way to humanize the article's subject and draw the readers in with a sense of personal connection.

It's also a cheap and efficient way to heighten the drama—particularly when it's immediately followed by this:

> Harris spent the past week at the ICU to be with her friend, Angel.

The contrast in that narrative transition is a tidy bit of sensationalism and helps pads out the wordcount.

(Or maybe I'm just being too cynical.)

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