Submitted by Substantial-Pass-992 t3_123deg3 in news
Slapbox t1_jdwfhht wrote
Reply to comment by Dcap16 in All 7 Pennsylvania chocolate factory explosion victims found by Substantial-Pass-992
Using "recovered" instead of "found" is the way to handle this, I think.
Dcap16 t1_jdwj5vh wrote
I agree. But, it’s just a headline. It’s become too normal to use body. Body this body that for one or two paragraph articles that serve no other purpose than to generate revenue from the dozen advertisements on the page. Last week locally “body pulled from pond” when the first paragraph gives the man’s name, age, circumstances (accident). Why not “56yo local man recovered from pond following accident”? It is just something that grinds my gears.
Brohara97 t1_jdxxjm0 wrote
Never thought about that before but you’re right! I think that may grind my gears now too!
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