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ThaVerySadTruth t1_it67awx wrote

Ramon Antonio Vargas needs to go back to journalism school. That title needs some grammatical work

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Amerisu t1_it6sta8 wrote

What's the grammatical problem with it?

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Ubi2447 t1_it7jlhz wrote

The fact that the subject is a brother adds nothing to the title as written.

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Amerisu t1_itbnfwo wrote

I don't know, I got right away that it was the former warden's brother who was also involved.

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NoHalf2998 t1_it6xiku wrote

Authors rarely write the headlines; that’s an editors job

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