Submitted by Horror_writer_1717 t3_zc30ts in nosleep
notyourcure t1_iyx8bgn wrote
"Next came a shapely young woman who seemed to be in her teenage years and in the throes of puberty. I quickly glanced away from the fact that she was developing all the right curves in all the right places and her face looked like it belonged on the cover of a magazine."
"She nodded and walked down the hall. It took every ounce of willpower not to watch her walk away in her nightdress."
Creeping on someone who hasn't even finished puberty? You had it coming, dude.
jemija t1_iyxwqr4 wrote
Yeah. The emphasis in the fact that she was a teenager entering puberty is weird. OP is a bit of a villain to me.
Redditributor t1_iyyd237 wrote
He is clearly a villain. He murdered all those people cruelly after they fed him and assisted him without any real evidence they were hurting innocent people.
realchessman t1_iyzza38 wrote
i mean, they did come to his room wearing cultist robes and trying to sacrifice him with a knife. I feel as if that was evidence enough.
Redditributor t1_iz0j6rw wrote
So now they can't freely traverse their home in clothing they like or even carry knives?!
Evening_Storage_6424 t1_iz8k6ym wrote
I took it to mean like 18-19 but even so if he’s in his late 30s ew
discaxia t1_izn2ka5 wrote
18 and 19 years old are not “in the throes of puberty”.
Griffith63 t1_iyyrs4s wrote
While I think it is also weird. I think OP was showing an animalistic view of the girl, which I think was a bit of foreshadowing to his animalistic side. Just my take.
Ok_Science_4094 t1_iyyz3cv wrote
That's a good point. I also found it weird, I wouldn't have thought about that if you didn't point it out.
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XxxshampooxxX t1_j1vn9fg wrote
I don't see that part in there.
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