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DuePomegranate t1_ivxu16l wrote

Reply to comment by Contank in TIFU by calling a girl Chinese by [deleted]

Umm, you're editing what they wrote.

>... the next thing I knew Naomi approached me. Paused for 5 seconds...

By omitting (for no reason) the subject before "paused", it leads to confusion because the previous sentence was both about Naomi and "me".

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Herodessy t1_ivznuxr wrote

I'm trying to edit this to the best of everyone's understanding but I'm making it more confusing

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