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Chance_Assignment422 t1_j2afwg3 wrote

Wow, you managed to garner some sympathy in the first half, but really ended that story looking like an asshole. You should’ve started with “I’m in a committed relationship but decided to go comfort my ex” and the foreshadowing would’ve written the rest.

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Psycho_Kronos t1_j2ay44b wrote

This post was directed by Steven Spielberg and Christopher Nolan, they wanted you to endure the plot twist signifying the confusion and downturn of the story to convey the point, Humanity is a complex thing.

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