Apex_121 t1_j94ajpi wrote on February 19, 2023 at 3:17 AM

Reply to comment by TheFinalDawnYT in [WP] You wake up in a pure white room. There are no doors or windows. Every personal item of yours has been taken, literally all you have are your clothes. You spot a folded piece of paper. You pick it up, open it and read it. by Crystal1501

I can try but I honestly don't know where to go from here :D

The story is supposed to repeat until she's the "perfect" robot and then at the end, there's a hint that she's turning human.

Apex_121 t1_j92er58 wrote on February 18, 2023 at 6:42 PM

Reply to comment by Crystal1501 in [WP] You wake up in a pure white room. There are no doors or windows. Every personal item of yours has been taken, literally all you have are your clothes. You spot a folded piece of paper. You pick it up, open it and read it. by Crystal1501

Yeah kind of. The idea is she's human but slowly being forced to turn in to a robot. Hence why when she bled from her lip, she lost control. The binary was "them" checking the coding and finding something wrong hence her being "shut down".

Apex_121 t1_j92atqg wrote on February 18, 2023 at 6:15 PM

Reply to [WP] You wake up in a pure white room. There are no doors or windows. Every personal item of yours has been taken, literally all you have are your clothes. You spot a folded piece of paper. You pick it up, open it and read it. by Crystal1501

YoUr NaMe IS MaDiSon

That's it. There's nothing else. I flip the paper over. There's nothing written on the back. I walk around the room, counting my paces. 36 steps wall to wall. It's a perfect cube. I frown and look down at my clothes, a white cotton midi night dress, not unlike the ones women would wear years ago. There's a pocket with something in it. I narrow my eyes and pull it out. It's a pen. I look it over, sitting down to take it apart and put it together again. "Yep... Its a pen" I sigh, grabbing the paper. I read the line over and over again. I say it out loud, I read it backwards, I even reverse the syllables but it doesn't make sense. Nothing does. I scribble out letters, maybe it's an anagram? Nope. Doesn't work.

"Madison. My name is Madison." I can't deny... It feels right. It feels like my name. Why can't I remember anything? I go back to pacing, nibbling at my lip. I guess I have a habit? The metallic taste of Iron fills my mouth as I keep nibbling while I think. My hands start clicking. What? Why? It's like every part of my body has to be moving. I can't keep anything still. Now I want to jump. I start jumping, my body moving itself. Why? Why can I not keep still? Now my head is bopping. I try to look around but can't. I'm not in control here. Am I going crazy? Suddenly I freeze - my whole body going rigid. I can see green numbers - wait that's binary code. Why can I see binary? I feel my energy drain, and my eyes start to close. I fight it. I don't want to sleep. I'm scared. Will I remember when I wake up? My eyes eventually shut and I feel my body drop. Then there's darkness.

I wake up in a pure white room. There's nothing with me... Just my clothes and a piece of paper. I open the folded paper.

YoUr NaMe IS MaDiSon yOu ArE NoT hUMaN

That's it. There's nothing else.