ArtixViper
ArtixViper t1_j27ysmv wrote
Reply to comment by Katze71 in [EU] You, an ordinary person with a boring job, marry the love of your life... and unknowingly into a big crime family. You don't notice because you've always been socially awkward. Because of your apparently blasé attitude to tense situations, you've developed a reputation in the Underworld by MidgardWyrm
I mean its a cute story but you really let the WP get away from you here.
ArtixViper t1_j29kkr6 wrote
Reply to comment by woofwoof007 in [EU] You, an ordinary person with a boring job, marry the love of your life... and unknowingly into a big crime family. You don't notice because you've always been socially awkward. Because of your apparently blasé attitude to tense situations, you've developed a reputation in the Underworld by MidgardWyrm
Sure they inspire stories and creative writing, but if you're presented a formula that is the basis of the story then thats generally the majority of what you're going to write in this sub, and in this case there is quite literally nothing left of the original story other than a brief two sentence mention of a father. It may as well have been its own story on its own post.