This is good but the watermelon juice is a concern. I would put it on a separate plate or serve or after the burger and fries.

Thanks, I hate it. I would eat all those things separately on one plate.

Overall good. Her right arm seems to be at a funny angle - a small detail. More importantly, why is this in r/pics instead of a more appropriate art or painting subreddit? Also what is this supposed to make me feel? The painting as composed doesn’t make this figure into an interesting person. She’s completely anonymous. I have no interest in what’s happening to her or her feelings. She’s lacking life.

Keep at it though. You do have talent!

I keep one in my car and one in my desk at work (not that I’m there very often!).