CherubielOne t1_isnadoq wrote on October 17, 2022 at 6:57 AM Reply to comment by WiseFerret in [WP] After missing the last bus of the night, you were resigning yourself to sleep at the bus stop. then, a sketchy, kind of creepy bus rolls up, and slides the doors open. it's definitely something your daytime self would avoid, but you're tired and not in the mood for spooky BS. by MegaTreeSeed That is an excellent beginning for an urban fantasy story. Good idea to make her summon the bus by mistake and good work to set up a number of mysteries just in this short part. Well done! Permalink Parent 3
CherubielOne t1_isnadoq wrote
Reply to comment by WiseFerret in [WP] After missing the last bus of the night, you were resigning yourself to sleep at the bus stop. then, a sketchy, kind of creepy bus rolls up, and slides the doors open. it's definitely something your daytime self would avoid, but you're tired and not in the mood for spooky BS. by MegaTreeSeed
That is an excellent beginning for an urban fantasy story. Good idea to make her summon the bus by mistake and good work to set up a number of mysteries just in this short part.
Well done!