Ilyaev_Art
Ilyaev_Art t1_iybrten wrote
Reply to comment by exponentials in [WP] You are constantly mocked for having such a weird superpower by all the other heroes. “The power to make anything into perfectly cooked soup”… One day, a massive meteor is barreling towards earth. As all the other heroes are panicking, you wait perfectly calm, at the impact zone, bowl in hand. by WoollerMan2003
You say in the first paragraph that you have a sense of dread, then in the next you felt a sense of calm.
Ilyaev_Art t1_iycp11z wrote
Reply to comment by Reformed_Narcissist in [WP] You are constantly mocked for having such a weird superpower by all the other heroes. “The power to make anything into perfectly cooked soup”… One day, a massive meteor is barreling towards earth. As all the other heroes are panicking, you wait perfectly calm, at the impact zone, bowl in hand. by WoollerMan2003
OP edited it, I understood the context but saying one feeling in one sentence and in the other an opposite sentence is a bit jarring.
It could have been fixed pretty easily by using a word like "but then.." etc to indicate the mood had changed.