Meepsicle83

Meepsicle83 t1_j95ids8 wrote

I love this, reads like an excerpt from an interesting longer story and wraps its scene up well.
And why shouldn't it be a fishhook? :) I'm reading some Neil Gaiman short stories and your 'snapshot' style is reminiscent of some of his. Please pretend that I have given you an award with the coins I don't have!

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