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meatballsbonanza t1_jbpbwij wrote
Reply to After sixteen months of work, I held the first physical copy of my first book. [image] by Kristofmorrow
Congrats! Stringing together enough words to constitute a novel is an epic task. You should be proud.
I had a look at the blurb at goodreads and I think you should consider simplifying the language. I had to read the first sentence a few times before I understood it. No good having readers give up even before they open the book.
meatballsbonanza t1_jbpi22l wrote
Reply to comment by Kristofmorrow in After sixteen months of work, I held the first physical copy of my first book. [image] by Kristofmorrow
Much easier to understand